Twilight is so much better because it’s real, at least it could be real. Harry Potter is just about some teenage kids who desperately need to grow up. Also there is no love in HP, Twilight is like the modern romeo & juliet, because if anyone has read romeo & juliet you would see how similar the mindless obsession is…..
yeah, twilight is real. cause i just go to school and find a vampire family that’s like 104 years old on average that wanna eat my blood. cause i fall in a.. painful and unworkable relationship because my girlfriend wants to suck out my blood. totally.
… I dont think they are badly written either, i think they are written so anyone can read and understand without the use of your dictionary, my 7 year old brother loves the films and would love to read the books but he cannot read them…they are too advanced for him..therefore they are NOT geared towards every age group…
just search up ‘stephanie meyer bad…’ and “stephanie meyer bad writing examples” will come up. okay for example:
‘I sat frozen in my seat, staring blankly after him. He was so mean. It
wasn’t fair. I began gathering up my things slowly, trying to block the
anger that filled me, for fear my eyes would tear up. For some reason, my temper was hardwired to my tear ducts. I usually cried when I was angry, a humiliating tendency.’
err. “he was so mean. it wasn’t fair.” sounds like 3rd grade writing to me, right. yeah i use a lot of periods for short choppy sentences. but i do that on purpose…
…Twilight goes more in depth with the emotions. You can feel Bella’s pain when Edward leaves her. You can feel her confusion between Edward and Jacob. You can feel her love for Renesmee
totally. cause you can’t feel any emotion at all when certain characters die in harry potter. you won’t feel fury rise up in your chest when a character kills another. you won’t feel euphoric and cheer, as you read a character pop out and kill a death eater. yup. you feel none of that at all.
…Because unlike Harry no one thoughts are actually that deep and intellectual. Infact i bet if any of us published our thoughts into a book none of them would be great english lit. Infact Bellas thoughts are more realistic.
harry’s thoughts are there to inform us of what’s going on. yeah sometimes it may seem a little exaggerated, but what you just said contradicts yourself. stephanie meyer is a bad writer, and writes “realistic” [sucky] thoughts/sentences.
…to those who are disturbed by bella and edward’s story need to remeber that this is FICTION. as in most fantasy fiction novels, reality is heightened in book . you are not supposed to literally think that a guy like Edward REALLY EXISTS out there for you. he is a fantasy character as even his species, a vampire, does not exist in the real world. he is a creature of pure imagination who is helplessly devoted to his beloved Bella to the point of obsession. If every book had to have a normal relationship they would all be the same, boring and no point in reading
ok… just kind of strange when teen girls read about some 105 year old virgin vampire watching you as you sleep and think it as romantic.
